- Thesis: Lectures are responsible for motivating students to learn.
- 1st argument: Lectures can influence others.
- 2nd argument: Motivation can come with innovative and creative assignments.
- 3rd argument: Lecturers play big role in students’ learning activities so motivation from them is needed.
- Counter argument: Self-willingness is the basis in learning.
- Conclusion: Motivating students to learn is lectures’ responsibility.
Generally speaking, motivation is what energizes, maintains, and
controls behavior. As such, it is clear why it plays an important role in the university. Because to make things that you want to do or
achieve happen, you need motivation. Therefore, motivation is needed by everyone so it is what drives you
towards a goal, gets you up in the morning, and keeps you working through a
task, determined to succeed when things get tough. This essay will demonstrate the reasons why
lectures are responsible to motivate students to learn.
To begin with, lectures can influence others,
especially the students. Because they have more experiences and higher
education than the students. That is why, when lectures speak up, people can
easily believe and get the point. Moreover, students need to have motivation in
order to understand and get the idea from lectures.
In addition, motivation is not just all about
giving students speech in boring and formal way. But giving more innovative and
creative assignment can lead them to have more spirit, passion and improve
their willingness of study. Because the regular assignment was too often and ordinary.
Finally, Lecturers play big role in students’ learning activities so
motivation from them is needed. Because more motivations can
lead to increased productivity and allow students to expand their abilities
more. Just like a quote from Mustafa Kemal Ataturk “A good teacher is like a
candle-it consumes itself to light the way for others”.
To sum up, although Self-willingness is the basis in learning
process, lectures should also be aware of the
important role of motivations. That is
why I totally agree with the statement above.
10 komentar:
I like your article Maya, we don't share the same idea though, hehehe.. I like them because you've put your ideas in a very good manner that it is very understandable and wide vocabulary while maintaining the ideas clear. But I think you have a typo in the 2nd paragraph, that you typed "lecturers" into "lectures" overall, it's an amazing article Maya, hope you'll post another for me to read!!
I think "to increased" should be to "increase",to+V1.
Your essay already complete. Maybe you can add more explanation about the quote Just like a quote from Mustafa Kemal Ataturk “A good teacher is like a candle-it consumes itself to light the way for others”.
Your grammar is already good enough.
Well-organized.
Overall is good, keep it up :D
Hi Maya. I think there are mistyped on the second paragraph, "lectures" should be lecturers, because each lecturers you typed 'lecturers' :D Same on the last paragraph, you should type lecturers instead of lectures. You have to pay attention about it.
Overall your writing and grammar is good
Keep it up
We share the same thought, and I really love your article. I find it is so interesting to get to know more from the perspective of someone else. I think your vocabulary has been good. Perhaps you need to pay more attention to the grammar. Overall it is great.
Nice writing, Maya! Overall your writing is good. Your grammar and writing skills also improve. But you have a typo and already mentioned by Antony and Lin before.
Actually I didn't spot any major mistakes, please keep up the good work! :)
You did great may! Just some little mistakes that you have to fix it, but overall awesome!
Keep it up may! I was impressed by your improvements!!
Good job!! I really enjoyed your article!!
I have the same idea with you! Your article is well organized tho
I like your article even though I disagree with you. What a neat article may!
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